Dr. Julie Barak |
Office -- 435 LLH |
Office Hours: |
E-mail -- jbarak@ mesastate.edu |
Phones: wk -- 248-1072 |
HP: http://mesastate.edu/~jbarak/ |
Honors English -- English 129
Spring 1998
Course Goals:
The catalogue says we'll be doing an "[e]xamination of readings and creation of persuasive essays, research papers and critical analyses" as we plow through the semester. We will be doing all of this, but I think that underlying all of that is an exploration of a certain kind of writing -- researched writing. I'm making a distinction here between "researched writing" and writing "The Research Paper," because the latter is a uniquely academic genre, one that not many of you will use outside the college classroom. Researched writing, or writing based on research, however, no matter what form it takes -- essay, letter to the editor, business report, fiction or poetry, letter of compliment or complaint, memos to colleagues or even the research paper -- will be useful to you for the rest of your life in any situation you may find yourself. So, the goals for the course are centered on learning basic research skills, rather than on producing a certain type of essay or paper. In particular, we will focus on posing and refining interesting questions, problems and hypothesis; finding credible and useful sources; and evaluating the content of what we read. We will focus on writing as a process, so that you see the "finished' product as part of a continuing process of engagement with your ideas. We'll discuss the rhetoric of argumentation and evidence within your own process of researched writing, so that you can learn how to present your ideas powerfully and convincingly. Part of what this entails is developing a sense of audience reactions to your writing, enabling you to write with greater sensitivity to others. And, of course, we'll practice using the conventional spelling, punctuation, mechanics and documentation of formal, written discourse.
Course Description: I spent last summer studying in Kenya. Because I learned so much and developed an enthusiasm for the place and its literature, I've chosen to use my experiences and resources and some of the texts I encountered as the beginning of our reading and writing for the semester. I hope you'll find them stimulating; I hope they'll push all of us to new discoveries, not just about Kenya, but also about our country and ourselves.
The course is designed as a reading and writing workshop. We'll be doing a lot of reading, thinking and writing about Kenya from various perspectives. We'll be reading and commenting on each other's work and relying on each other's expertise as readers and writers as we move through the semester. We'll be sharing our writing with each other, commenting on what we read, and going beyond the classroom readings to research topics that we choose for ourselves. We'll be examining the works of other writers to see what makes them effective, to try to understand how and where they are most persuasive, how they develop and support an argument, how we can expand our own writing repertoire by observing and practicing what they do. We'll also be thinking and writing about our research and writing processes. How and why do you do what you do as a researcher and writer? What is effective in your process? Where do you "spin your wheels" or waste time and effort in your research and writing process? How can you learn more effective strategies and techniques for researching and writing?
Obviously, we're going to be asking a lot of questions of ourselves, of each other and of various texts. We're going to be examining our writing and reading lives. Most of our learning will be the result of sharing -- speaking, reading, responding to the thoughts of others. I'm looking forward to the experience.
Required Texts:
Ngugi wa Thiongo. A Grain of Wheat
----- Matigari
----- Moving the Center
----- The River Between
----- The Trial of Dedan Kimathi
----- Writers in Politics
Walker, Melissa. Writing Research Papers.
Course Requirements:
We'll discuss the conventions of each type of essay well before it's due and we'll workshop drafts in class before you're required to submit any draft to either your peers or to me. The drafts will be submitted once to your classmates and once to me. They'll be graded when I read them. You'll be required to revise them once more for the final portfolio.
Each draft must be accompanied by a writer's note. The note for the first draft should perform the following tasks: 1) clearly state your thesis or organizing idea and discuss how the essay is organized. 2) explain what you were trying to accomplish (as in describe, persuade, argue, discuss, explore, explain, compare, contrast). 3) discuss areas that you feel are problematic or that you'd like specific feedback about. The note for the second draft should include all of the above, plus describe the changes you made in response to the feedback you received from your classmates. See requirement #6 below for comments about the final writer's note.
3. Responses -- Three classmates will read the first draft of each of your essays. Classmates will develop a response to the paper critiquing its effectiveness and offering suggestions for revision. The writer's note should guide your response, but I'll supply some additional guidelines for responding to help you out, too. The responder is responsible for giving the writer some feedback they can WORK with. The writer will grade each response, based on how helpful it was to her or him in the revision process and turn it in to me with the revision of the essay. Over the course of the semester, you'll write 9 responses. The average of the grades of the responses is worth 10% of your final grade.
4. Class Presentation -- During the course of the semester, each of you will be expected to lead the class in a discussion of one of the texts we're reading. Your discussion should touch on matters of form and content, provoking a discussion not only of the topic of the text, but also of the way the topic is developed. You can use your discussion period to connect the literature with current events, to connect the literature with the essays, to connect the literature with the writing we're all doing. Finally, you need to lead us in a writing exercise that evolves from some rhetorical strategy you observed in the text. Can you help us work with images? Can you help us to use conversation or dialogue? Can you help us strengthen our use of verbs? Can you help us to cite sources more gracefully? Can you help us move between genres in our writing? Can you help us develop stronger descriptions? Can you help us critique an argument or construct our own argument?
You should work with a partner for this requirement. The presentation is worth 10% of your grade. If you miss the date assigned for your presentation for any reason, you will not be able to make it up. You will receive an "F" for this requirement.
Show up for class. You’ve got to come to class to do well in the class. In order to share your responses and to help us construct a shared meaning of the texts we’ll read and write, you have to be here to participate in the discussions. But, because I know that life can get complicated, everybody gets three free absences. After three, you lose a third of a letter grade for each absence. (That is, if you have a B for the class, but you’ve missed 5 classes, your final grade will be a C+.) You will also be penalized for coming into class late – three "lates" equals one absence.
Turn work in on time. Late work will not be accepted. I'm adamant about this. There will be no exceptions to this rule. If you don't have the writing in your hand in class on the day we're going to be working with it, you don't get credit for it -- you will receive an "F" for that assignment. Do your work ahead of time. Print your essay or response out the night BEFORE it's due. Don't wait until the last minute to dash something off. Be sure you back up all the work you do on your computer so that you have a copy on your hard drive and a copy on disk. I will not accept excuses of ANY sort for late work – computer, printer, and disk problems included.
Schedule
Date |
Assignment |
Wed. Jan. 13 |
Introductions |
Fri. Jan. 15 |
Read Moving the Center, 1-29, Lecture |
Mon. Jan. 18 |
Read Moving the Center, 30-58, Lecture |
Wed. Jan. 20 |
Read Writers in Politics, 3-33. |
Fri. Jan. 22 |
Read Writers in Politics 42-48, 53-67 |
Mon. Jan. 25 |
Read Chapters 1-10 of The River Between. |
Wed. Jan. 27 |
Read Chapters 11-20 of The River Between. (Film) |
Fri. Jan. 29 |
Finish The River Between. Second Presentation. |
Mon. Feb. 1 |
Description of Critical Analysis (Read Walker, Chapter 12, and Handout). Brainstorming. Research Assignment. |
Wed. Feb. 3 |
Report on Research. Sharing of ideas and articles. |
Fri. Feb. 5 |
Discussion of similarities/differences between R & J and The River Between. Possibilities for critical analysis? |
Mon. Feb. 8 |
Read Moving the Center 60-75, 88-95 |
Wed. Feb. 10 |
Read Moving the Center 96-113 |
Fri. Feb. 11 |
1st draft of critical analysis due, in class sharing/workshop |
Mon. Feb. 15 |
Responses due to critical analysis. |
Wed. Feb. 17 |
Read Writers in Politics 82-92, 49-52 of Writers in Politics and Preface and 1st Movement of the Trial of Dedan Kimathi. Third Presentation |
Fri. Feb. 19 |
Finish the Trial of Dedan Kimathi. Fourth Presentation |
Mon. Feb. 22 |
2nd draft of critical analysis due, in class sharing/workshop |
Wed. Feb. 24 |
Read Chapters 1-6 of Grain of Wheat. Fifth Presentation |
Fri. Feb. 26 |
Read Chapters 7-9 of Grain of Wheat. Sixth Presentation. Journals due for review. |
Mon. Mar. 1 |
Finish Grain of Wheat. Seventh Presentation |
Wed. Mar. 3 |
Brainstorm for topics for research paper, plus a little writing. |
Fri. Mar. 5 |
Research day |
Mon. Mar. 8 |
Report on research. Sharing of ideas and articles. |
Wed. Mar. 10 |
Some tools for generating writing. |
Fri. Mar. 12 |
Research/Reading day |
Mon. Mar. 15 |
1st draft of research paper due. In class sharing/workshop. |
Wed. Mar. 17 |
Read 116-135 in Moving the Center. |
Fri. Mar. 19 |
Responses due to research paper. In class sharing/workshop. |
Mon. Mar. 22 |
Spring Break |
Wed. Mar. 24 |
Spring Break |
Fri. Mar. 26 |
Spring Break |
Mon. Mar. 29 |
Read 101-138 of Writers in Politics |
Wed. Mar. 31 |
Read 154-176 of Moving the Center |
Fri. Apr. 2 |
2nd draft of research paper due. |
Mon. Apr. 05 |
Brainstorming for persuasive paper. And some writing. |
Wed. Apr. 07 |
Research day. |
Fri. Apr. 09 |
Report on research. Sharing ideas and articles. |
Mon. Apr. 12 |
Read Part I of Matigari. Eighth Presentation. |
Wed. Apr. 14 |
Read Part II of Matigari. Ninth Presentation. |
Fri. Apr. 16 |
Finish Matigari. Tenth Presentation. |
Mon. Apr. 19 |
1st draft of persuasive essay due. |
Wed. Apr. 21 |
Responses to persuasive essay due. In class sharing/workshop. |
Fri. Apr. 23 |
Revision Workshop. |
Mon. Apr. 26 |
2nd draft of persuasive essay due. In class sharing and workshop. |
Wed. Apr. 28 |
Revision day |
Fri. Apr. 30 |
Return drafts. Discussion/Sharing. |
Mon. May 3 |
Portfolio due |