English Composition 111 -- Fall 1998
    MWF 9:00-9:50
    Instructor: Julie Barak

    Course Goals
    Course Methods/
    Description
    Required Texts and
    Other Expenses
    Summary of
    Evaluation Criteria
     Reading/Assignment
    Due Date Schedule
    Course Requirements:
    Writing
               Journal
                    Description of
                    Exercises
               Essays
                   Description of
                   Essays
                  Suggestions for
                 Writers's Note
               Responses
                    Suggestions for
                     Responding
              Learning Letters
                      Suggestions for
                       Letters    
               Portfolio
    Reading and Discussion
               Outside Texts
               Class Texts     
    Attendance
               Show up!
                Timliness!

    Course Goals:

    1) To develop a writing habit. 2) To practice several skills and techniques that are helpful in various stages of the writing process: pre-writing, drafting, revising, and editing. 3) To develop the ability to respond helpfully, analytically, and critically to the writing of others -- both peers and professionals. 4) To learn to accept and to respond in writing and through re-writing to others' comments about your work.


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    Course Methods/Description:

    The course is designed as a writing/reading workshop. We will spend most of our days in class writing, reading our writing out loud, and discussing that writing. We will also read and discuss the work of several published writers. In order to be a successful member of this class, you must be prepared to write daily in and out of class, to read your work out loud to small groups of your classmates and to the class as a whole, to comment thoughtfully on the writing of others and to accept others' comments about your own work. Participation in all of these activities is required from all members of the course. If you opt not to participate in the writing, sharing, or responding, you will fail the class. Writing is a craft we can learn. It is also a means of exploring ourselves, our relationships with others and with our world. Writing is a mind-expanding, exciting, risky business. Let's all take up the challenge of living a writer's life this semester. It will be worth the effort!

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    Required Texts and Other Expenses:

    --Sharon Loan Fiffer and Steve Fiffer, Eds. Family: American Writers Remember TheirOwn.
    --Leland Jones and Lloyd Newman. Our America: Life and Death on the South Side of    Chicago.
    --A couple of file folders for your journals and portfolios. Lots of paper and ink.
    --Copies of your essays as needed for peer and instructor evaluation.

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    Course Requirements:

    Writing --

    Journal. Each week you should spend at least two hours outside of class working with the exercises we will begin in class. I've designed these exercises to help you move through various stages of the writing process -- pre-writing, drafting, researching, revising, and editing. We'll move through them in this order, but you might find, as you journal each week, that you'd like to go back and try one of the previous exercises with a new idea you're writing about. You might do the exercises more than once. For example, you might do the pre-writing exercises for each new piece you start. You might find a couple of drafting or revising exercises that really work for you, and go back to them for each draft. Use the exercises to your advantage. By the end of the semester you should have a MINIMUM (for me that translates in to a grade of "C") of 15 journal entries -- one for each exercise we "practice" in class. I'll collect and evaluate your journals 3 times during the semester. The journal is worth 14% of your grade.

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    Essays. At the end of the semester, four polished essays, each about 4-5 double-spaced pages long, are due in your portfolio. During the course of the semester, two drafts of each of these four essays need to be submitted to me and to the class on the dates indicated on the calendar. Each draft must be accompanied with a letter that discusses the writing issues you dealt with as you wrote or revised the piece. I call this kind of reflection a "Writer's Note" or "Comments on the Draft." This letter is absolutely essential reflection, not only for you, but also for your peers, who will need your comments in order to advise you about your writing. No draft will be accepted without this letter. Each of the eight drafts are worth 6% of your grade, for a total of 48%.

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    Responses. You must respond, in writing, to two of your classmates' drafts each time a draft is submitted. I will provide you with some guidelines for responding and we'll use class time to read the essays and to begin to formulate a response. Then you'll have a day or two to polish your response, type it up and turn a copy over to the writer and to me. We can decide if you'd like to work with the same group members all the time, or if you'd like to switch partners throughout the semester. Each response is worth 1% of your grade, for a total of 16%.

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    Midterm and Final Learning Letters. At midterm and at the end of the semester, you'll be asked to assess your learning in writing. Each of these letters is worth 3.5% of your grade, for a total of 7%.

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    Portfolio. At the end of the semester you will submit four polished drafts, one for each of the essays we've worked on during the semester. In addition to the polished drafts, you'll submit the rough drafts and the revisions that have lead to that draft. Each polished draft will be accompanied by a comprehensive writer's note. This portfolio is worth 15% of your total grade.

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    Reading and Discussion --

    Outside Texts. Each week, we will have a reading assignment from our two texts or from some other sources I'll provide. We will spend one day discussing these readings, especially focussing on the ways the writers present their ideas about writing and on their writing techniques. You should always try to utilize the information gained from the reading and the discussion when you are working on your journal exercises and drafting. These readings and discussions should play a large role in your comments in your writer's notes and in your learning letters, where you might tell me and your classmates what you have learned from these other writers that you've tried to implement in your own writing.

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    Class Texts. We will also spend time reading and discussing each other's writing. Sometimes we'll do this in small groups, sometimes as a whole class.

    Your participation in these discussions is important to me when I make decisions about grades. Have I heard your voice? How have your comments influenced the other writers in the class? Participation is determined by 1) how much you say, 2) how thoughtful and useful your contributions are to other writers, 3) how carefully you listen to the contributions of others. Lack of participation or inappropriate, distracting participation can adversely affect your grade.

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    Attendance --

    Show up for class. You've got to come to class to do well in the class. In order to share your responses and to help us construct a shared meaning of the texts we'll read, you have to be here to participate in the discussions. But, because I know that life can get complicated, everybody gets three free absences. After three, you lose a third of a letter grade for each absence. (That is, if you have a B for the class, but you've missed 5 classes, your final grade will be a C+.) You will also be penalized for coming into class late - three "lates" equals one absence.

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    Turn work in on time. Late work will not be accepted. I'm adamant about this. There will be no exceptions to this rule. If you don't turn your work in on a day we're doing group work, life is miserable. I don't want to be miserable. So, if you don't have the writing in your hand in class on the day we're going to be working with it, you don't get credit for it -- you will receive an "F" for that assignment. Do your work ahead of time. Print your essay or response out the night BEFORE it's due. Don't wait until the last minute to dash something off. Be sure you back up all the work you do on your computer so that you have a copy on your hard drive and a copy on disk. I will not accept excuses of ANY sort for late work - computer, printer, and disk problems included.

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    Summary of Evaluation Criteria --

    Final Packet of Four essays and drafts: 15%
    8 Drafts -- two for each paper     48% total or 6% each
    16 Responses to peer drafts --
    two responses per student for each draft:
    16% total or 1% each
    Journal             14%
    Learning Letters  7% total or 3.5% each

    This all looks pretty scientific, but remember that lack of attendance and participation can adversely affect these numbers.

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    ************************************************************************************************************************************************************ Reading/Assignment Due Date Schedule

    Week 1
    Aug. 19 & 21
    Week 2
    Aug. 24-28
    Week 3
    Aug. 31-Sept 03
    Week 4
    Sept. 07-11
    Week 5
    Sept. 14-17
    Week 6
    Sept. 21-25
    Week 7
    Sept. 28-Oct. 02
    Week 8
    Oct. 05-09
    Week 9
    Oct. 12-16
    Week 10
    Oct. 19-23
    Week 11
    Oct. 26-30
    Week 12
    Nov. 02-06
    Week 13
    Nov. 09-13
    Week 14
    Nov. 16-20
    Week 15
    Nov. 23-27
    Week 16
    Nov. 30-Dec. 02
    Week 17
    Dec. 09

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    Week 1 Aug. 19 Introductions. Read through the syllabus. Turn in questions on Friday.
    Aug. 21 Self-Diagnostic Writing

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    Week 2 Aug. 24 Life-Line
    Aug. 26 Assign Essay #1, Share and Respond to Life-Line Exercise
    Aug. 28 Read Introduction, Hoagland, Staples, Chang-Rae Lee, Shacochis

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    Week 3 Aug. 31 First Draft of Essay #1 Due (Family Narrative)
    Sept. 01 Lists and Brainstorming
    Sept. 03 Responses to Essay #1 due to writer and to me

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    Week 4 Sept. 07 Read José Raúl Bernardo, Jayne Anne Phillips,
    Whitney Otto
    Sept. 09 Clustering and Brainstorming
    Sept. 11 Assign Essay #2. Share and Respond to Brainstorming Exercises.

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    Week 5 Sept. 14 First Draft of Essay #2 Due (Reflective Essay)
    Sept. 16 Focussing by working with Titles
    Sept. 18 Responses to Essay #2 due to writer and to me


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    Week 6 Sept. 21 Revision of Draft #1 due
    Sept. 23 Focussing by working with Tension
    Sept. 25 Responses to Revision of Draft #1 due

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    Week 7 Sept. 28 Revision of Draft #2 Due
    Sept. 30 Focussing through Loop Writing
    Oct. 02 Responses to Draft #2 Due

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    Week 8 Oct. 05 Read Alice Hoffman, Edwidge Danticat, Elizabeth McCracken,
    Beverly Donofrio, Bell Hooks, Deborah Tannen
    Oct. 07 Assign Essay #3, Exercise on Character Analysis
    Oct. 09 Mid Term Learning Letter Due
    Read first half of Our America

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    Week 9 Oct. 12 Fall Break
    Oct. 14 Interviews -- Some brainstorming, some tips, some other examples
    Oct. 16 Revising -- Beginnings and Endings

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    Week 10 Oct. 19 Finish Our America
    Oct. 21 Focussing by thinking about Structure
    Oct. 23 1st Draft of Essay #3 due

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    Week 11 Oct. 26 Responses to Essay #3 due.
    Assign Essay #4 (Summary and Response)
    Oct. 28 Summary and Response. Some examples, some discussion.
    Oct. 30 A word about research and how and where to do it.

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    Week 12 Nov. 02 Revision of Essay #3 Due
    Nov. 04 A day in the library
    Nov. 06 Copies or addresses of articles you'll be using in Essay #4 due

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    Week 13 Nov. 09 Responses to Revision of Essay #3 Due
    Nov. 11 First Draft of Essay #4 Due
    Nov. 13 Revising -- Interpretive Paraphrase

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    Week 14 Nov. 16 Responses to Essay #4 Due
    Nov. 18 Revising -- Glossing
    Nov. 20 Revising -- Focussing on the "Good Stuff"

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    Week 15 Nov. 23 Revision of Essay #4 Due
    Nov. 25 Thanksgiving Vacation
    Nov. 27 Thanksgiving Vacation

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    Week 16 Nov. 30 Responses to Revision of Essay #4 Due
    Dec. 02 In-class Editing
    Dec. 04 In-class Editing

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    Week 17 Dec. 09 Portfolio due -- includes 4 essays, drafts and revisions,
    and final Learning letter.

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